Six Sentence Sunday 6/17/2012

Welcome to my Six Sentence Sunday entry!

Today I offer up six sentences from an in-progress novella about a female archaelogist who goes on a site in Turkey and digs up a gorgeous Greek hunk!

She stepped on a medium-sized rock without testing it first and it tilted to the left, taking her foot with it into the lee of a larger rock.  A sudden stab of pain confirmed it, she'd twisted her ankle!  Leaning on the olive branch, Sarah tried to pull her foot out of the hole, but it stuck fast. Growing worried, she tugged harder, supporting her weight with the stick and leaning back.  The sudden shift of rock and release of her foot left her reeling backwards.  Scrabbling at the surrounding rocks, Sarah fell back, her shoulders striking a shadowed section of the cliff face, then fell further as the layers of dirt and loose shale rock dissolved in a spray. 

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2 Response to "Six Sentence Sunday 6/17/2012"

  1. Elin Gregory says:
    June 17, 2012 at 10:08 AM

    Exciting! I have a special regard for Greece. :)

  2. Maryellen Brady says:
    June 17, 2012 at 11:05 AM

    now I'm eager to see what happens next!

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