Horny Hump Day Blog Hop 5/23

Welcome to my second Horny Hump Day offering, also from my WIP 'The Hand Maid'.



When she opened at his touch, he tilted his head, slanting his mouth across hers and deepening the kiss, his tongue sweeping in to tangle with hers in an intense, heated battle.  He tasted of sunlight and honey mingled with smoky whiskey.  Her stomach filled with an aching fire that melted at the same instant, spreading to her limbs in a heavy golden, tingling rush.

7 Response to "Horny Hump Day Blog Hop 5/23"

  1. Grinelda Markowitz says:
    May 23, 2012 at 12:46 AM

    very evocative of lust and affection. nicely painted imagery. and oh, so sexy.

  2. Damian Bloodstone says:
    May 23, 2012 at 4:36 AM

    Loved the detail and imaginary of this, especially the taste aspect. You don't usually read that. Very lovely and sensual.

  3. Patricia Green says:
    May 23, 2012 at 9:42 AM

    This is very sensual with the tastes so vivid and sensation described with color. Excellent work!

  4. Carrie-Anne says:
    May 23, 2012 at 12:00 PM

    Very sensual and descriptive! I like the idea of describing the taste instead of just the actions.

  5. Verity Ant says:
    May 23, 2012 at 2:59 PM

    You had me at "smoky whiskey"... This is terrific.

  6. Jenna says:
    May 23, 2012 at 6:10 PM

    Such vivid imagery! Gives me the intensity of these two right up front. Excellent snippet!

  7. Ashen White says:
    May 28, 2012 at 9:07 PM

    Excellent use of words and structure. Hot scene - an excellent snippet. Thanks for sharing.

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